A Father's Discipline: Chapter 10

All righty, so our hero allegedly owns a men's bath house.  Noice.  Are we to assume that Jimmy Boy "was" gay, married some chick, had a kid, and that's why his sister says that he got all weird and depressed when the kid was born?  Yeah, I imagine trying to bang someone with a body you are not attracted to and pretend you're someone you're not might make you just the slightest bit depressed.

It isn't internally consistent because Proctor has written Jimdawg as if he is attracted to Rose Ann--wants to kiss her and date her and whatever.  I'm sure that's only through the grace of the LORD that shines through Rose Ann's thoroughly tongued butthole that he is "turning straight".

The first scene is just more dialogue between Ann Rose and Junior Prize in an unknown location, just disembodied voices discussing the evidence she found and how it would "destroy his father".

No, seriously, what year is it supposed to be?  They talk about email, so that's some indication of the decade, but why would it be so terrible if his father owned a men's bath house?  I don't fucking get it.  I suppose I'm just too liberal to understand.  Tragedy.

Rose Ann pulls out of Jim Sr.'s ass, her strap-on glistening with santorum.

Which is liberal-speak for "she 'broke up' with Jim Sr. because he used to own a men's bath house."  If my eyes rolled any harder, I'd have to chase them across the floor blindly like chasing marbles in the dark.

She says again that knowledge of the business license would destroy him.  What fucking city are they in?  Proctor says east coast, but that's all.  Why the fuck would it "destroy him"?  I get that it's a common Christian rhetoric that "gay is bad, mmkay?" but the author never touches on the subject.  I guess we just need to assume that any reader ever is going to fall back on their fainting couch at the mere thought of this scandal.  Rose Ann is certainly appalled.

"Tell me, Jim, were you one of them?"

I just picture her saying "them" with the most hateful, vitriolic tone.

He denies it, saying it was all about greed.  Gasp.  Yet another sin.

Rose Ann leaves, I imagine in disgust because it's not exactly on good terms and she is utterly appalled at his complacency in the "homosexual agenda".

Jimmy Boy immediately falls to his knees and starts praying for forgiveness.  Oh, god, self hate looks so painful.

Probably bad for the knees too.